I have attached the original paper that needs to be

 I have attached the original paper that needs to be revised off of the new guidance. Please pay attention to all comments provided on attached paper to make sure all areas are revised.

Write a 750-1000 word essay about a pair of items in which the similarities and differences of those items are compared and contrasted in the style described within Unit III. For this assignment, you will edit and revise your Unit III Comparative Essay Draft. This final essay will be your last opportunity to make adjustments to the essay.

Purpose: Throughout Unit III, we discussed the conventions of the comparative essay. The purpose of this assignment is to measure your mastery of the conventions of the comparative essay. For this assignment, you will practice the skill of careful revision and refinement of your work as sometimes re-envisioning your writing can be more difficult than writing the essay the first time. However, to make your writing the best that it can be, you must practice the skills of editing and revision.

Process: For the comparative essay, you will complete the following steps:

  1. Read through your paper      looking for structural concerns: See Unit IV, Lesson 5, for more details.      Be sure that you are satisfied with your paper as a whole before you do      any detailed editing.
  2. Read through your paper      looking for grammar and stylistics: See Unit IV, Lesson 5, for more      details. You may need to read your essay aloud or have someone else look      over the essay to find all of your mistakes and awkward phrasings.
  3. Submit a Writing Center      request using the Writing Center Request Form in the student portal      (optional). Have one of CSU’s trained Writing Specialists read through      your essay before submission.

Stylistic details: All essays must meet the following requirements:

  • 750-1000 words.
  • Write in Times New      Roman, 12 pt. font.
  • Include one-inch margins      on all sides.
  • Use double spacing      (top-to-bottom every page, to include above and below titles and centered      words).
  • Include an APA title      page (for all essays) and reference list that includes all of the sources      used in the essay.
  • Include page numbers      (upper-right corner only).
  • Adhere to APA convention      and documentation style.
  • At least one source is      required. All sources used must be cited.